essay

Here's an excerpt from E's "What I Did This Summer" essay. It's amazing to be that an 8 year-old wrote this:
"The remaining three kittens were so cute! Two of them were black and white, while the other was grey. One of the black and white kittens had a black nose and a black spot underneath its mouth that made it look like it had a black tongue and was always sticking it out, but you wouldn’t guess that she was taunting or teasing you because she was very shy and rarely left her mother’s side."